Thread:SkittyTheTwit/@comment-5873607-20140727082312

I have to say, It's okay, but not perfect. You did take our suggestions, but it still has some work to do. Just so you know, you don't have to change your story to conform to the critic's ideals, you can write whatever you want. Just keep in mind that critics know what's entertaining, and their suggestions can help your work a lot. 