User blog comment:Berryleaf/Inanimate Insanity Creepypasta/@comment-5873607-20130404232529

Review: First of all, Paper needs a motive. It made sense to kill Kinfe, but why OJ? They were such great friends in the final episode!

Don't use non-sequiters like "OJ was watching food network" or "Paper was hit by an incoming oil truck".

Overall, the idea is fine, but it needs more elaboration.

See if this helps!